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Bradley Kuhn (bkuhn) - 7 years ago 2016-11-22 17:38:36
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Various editorial changes, apparently from Brett.

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-<li>We brought three new projects under the protection of Conservancy: <a href="https://forums.librehealth.io/">LibreHealth</a>, a critical initiative for health in free and open source software, <a href="https://www.spec-ops.io/">Spec-Ops</a>, a project dedicated to supporting the creation of open standards in critical areas, including payments and identity
+<li>We brought three new projects under the protection of Conservancy: <a href="https://forums.librehealth.io/">LibreHealth</a>, a critical initiative for health in free and open source software, <a href="https://www.spec-ops.io/">Spec-Ops</a>, a project dedicated to creating of open standards in critical areas, including payments and identity
 and <a href="http://brew.sh/">Homebrew</a>, a software package manager for Apple's OS X. </li>
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 <li>We helped Conservancy projects Bro, Buildbot, and Godot receive Mozilla MOSS grants. Another Conservancy project, phpMyAdmin successfully completed a thorough security audit as part of Mozilla's Secure Open Source Fund (no serious issues were found!)</li>
+<li>We helped Conservancy projects Bro, Buildbot, and Godot receive Mozilla MOSS grants. Another Conservancy project, phpMyAdmin, successfully completed a thorough security audit as part of Mozilla's Secure Open Source Fund (no serious issues were found!).</li>
 <li>We <a href="/news/2016/may/10/yorba-assigns-copyrights/">received an assignment of copyrights from the Yorba Foundation</a>, including Shotwell and Geary, in order to safeguard those copyrights for the future</li>
+<li>We <a href="/news/2016/may/10/yorba-assigns-copyrights/">received an assignment of copyrights from the Yorba Foundation</a>, including Shotwell and Geary, in order to safeguard those copyrights for the future.</li>
 <li>We conducted friendly discussions with companies out of compliance with
-the GPL, seeking non-litigious resolutions in accordance with our <a href="/copyleft-compliance/principles.html">Principles</a>. We <a href="/news/2016/nov/03/linux-compliance-agreements/">published our template agreements</a> and also held two <a href="https://lwn.net/SubscriberLink/706361/a9ca4ee12c04d5d7/">feedback</a> <a href="/blog/2016/oct/27/feedback-gpl/"> sessions</a> to evaluate and improve our compliance efforts. We also worked with other community members to <a href="/blog/2016/jul/19/patrick-mchardy-gpl-enforcement/">bring clarity to international activities around GPL compliance</a> and help make the ecosystem safer for free software adoption. We stayed committed to providing <a href="/blog/2016/feb/25/zfs-and-linux/">straight-forward analysis about the GPL</a>.</li>
+the GPL, seeking non-litigious resolutions in accordance with our <a href="/copyleft-compliance/principles.html">Principles</a>. We <a href="/news/2016/nov/03/linux-compliance-agreements/">published our template agreements</a> and held two <a href="https://lwn.net/SubscriberLink/706361/a9ca4ee12c04d5d7/">feedback</a> <a href="/blog/2016/oct/27/feedback-gpl/"> sessions</a> to evaluate and improve our compliance efforts. We also worked with other community members to <a href="/blog/2016/jul/19/patrick-mchardy-gpl-enforcement/">bring clarity to international activities around GPL compliance</a> and help make the ecosystem safer for free software adoption. We stayed committed to providing <a href="/blog/2016/feb/25/zfs-and-linux/">straightforward analysis about the GPL</a>.</li>
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 shared our expertise in initiatives
 like <a href="https://copyleft.org/">copyleft.org</a>. We participated in
 interviews and <a href="/blog/">blogposts</a>, and
 Bradley and Karen published episodes of <a href="http://faif.us/">Free as in
 Freedom</a>, dedicated to discussing the important issues in software
 like <a href="https://copyleft.org/">copyleft.org</a>. We gave
 interviews and <a href="/blog/">blog posts</a>, and
 Bradley and Karen released episodes of <a href="http://faif.us/">Free as in
 Freedom</a>, all dedicated to discussing the important issues in software
 freedom.</li>
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 future of technology. We do them because they are right. <strong>But we cannot do
-them without you.</strong> Last year you helped us to fundraising goals so that we not only did not have to shut our doors but instead were able to <a href="/news/2016/aug/22/brett-joins/">hire a new employee</a>. Even with our additional employee, we do not yet have the resources to handle our existing workload.</p>
+them without you.</strong> Last year you helped us to fundraising goals that didn't merely keep us running but even let us <a href="/news/2016/aug/22/brett-joins/">hire a new employee</a>. Yet even this staffing level isn't enough+} to handle our existing workload.</p>
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 we cannot afford even one staff member and basic overhead with the revenue we
-take in from our projects.  With over 1000 supporters, we can now sustain the basic
+take in from our projects.  With over 1,000 Supporters, we can now sustain the basic
 work and we will survive.  But to thrive, and handle the really complex tasks like
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 GPL (Christoph's case <a href="/news/2016/aug/09/vmware-appeal/">continues on appeal</a>). While this work is extremely important to the continued long-term
-success of software freedom and copyleft not to mention in the long term
+success of software freedom and copyleft, not to mention in the long-term
 interest of the industry as a whole, it makes fundraising from companies
 very difficult.  Some companies
-have withdrawn from funding us and some have even successfully pressured
+have stopped funding us and some have even successfully pressured
 conferences to cancel or prevent talks on our compliance work. We do
@@ ... / @@ -405,3 +405,3 @@ source society. </p> @@
-</ap>And, while we appreciate our corporate donors, we simply cannot depend
+<p>While we appreciate our corporate donors, we simply cannot depend
 solely on grants from companies who may not find our mission to be
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 continue to provide a full range of administrative, bookkeeping, and legal
-services to our member projects, educate the public, <b>and</b>
+services to our member projects, educate the public, <strong>and</strong>
 undertake compliance efforts.  We hope you will <a href="#donate-box" class="donate-now">sign up as a Supporter</a> to help us achieve this. If we don't reach our goal, we will

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