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Bradley M. Kuhn - 4 years ago 2020-10-03 02:44:04
bkuhn@sfconservancy.org

Various typo fixes and wordsmith changes.

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www/conservancy/static/copyleft-compliance/enforcement-strategy.html

www/conservancy/static/copyleft-compliance/firmware-liberation.html

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   a license that ensures the rights and software freedoms of hobbyists who
   seek full control and modifiability of devices they own. With the benefit
   of this grant, Conservancy plans to accelerate these plans in 2020 and to
   keep the public informed at every stage of the process.</p>
   seek full control and modifiability of devices they own. Conservancy plans
   to accelerate these plans in late 2020 into early 2021 and we'll keep the
   public informed at every stage of the process.</p>
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 <h3 id="alternative-firmware-project">Alternative Firmware Project</h3>
+<h3 id="alternative-firmware-project"><a href="/copyleft-compliance/firmware-liberation.html">Alternative Firmware Project</a></h3>
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   up this task, and financial investment only comes after volunteers have put
   in the unfunded work to make an MVP alternative firmware. While volunteer
+  in the unfunded work to make an <acronym title="minimal viable product">MVP</acronym> alternative firmware. While volunteer
   involvement remains essential to the success of alternative firmware

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@@ ... / @@ -17,5 +17,5 @@ and improvement of the released software for users.</p> @@
   <a href="enforcement-strategy.html">continues our efforts in that
-  regard</a>. However, We can
+  regard</a>. However, we can
   replicate <a href="/copyleft-compliance/enforcement-strategy.html#brief-history-of-user-focused-gpl-enforcement">the
-  success found with OpenWRT</a> <em>only by</em> a substantial
+  success found with OpenWrt</a> <em>only by</em> a substantial
   effort <strong>after</strong> enforcement occurs to turn the compliant
@@ ... / @@ -61,3 +61,3 @@ and improvement of the released software for users.</p> @@
-<p>When alternative firmware projects like OpenWRT exist for IoT devices,
+<p>When alternative firmware projects like OpenWrt exist for IoT devices,
   non-technical users can replace the software on their devices and benefit
@@ ... / @@ -98,3 +98,3 @@ and improvement of the released software for users.</p> @@
   This expected change in behavior will open opportunities to replicate the
-  OpenWRT approach in another embedded electronic subindustry. Fast action
+  OpenWrt approach in another embedded electronic subindustry. Fast action
   will be necessary; most IoT products have an 18 month lifecycle, so we seek
@@ ... / @@ -107,3 +107,3 @@ and improvement of the released software for users.</p> @@
   obtained in our GPL enforcement efforts and build alternative firmware
-  projects as they did with OpenWRT, history shows us that the creation of
+  projects as they did with OpenWrt, history shows us that the creation of
   such projects is not guaranteed and exceedingly rare.</p>
@@ ... / @@ -120,3 +120,3 @@ and improvement of the released software for users.</p> @@
-<p>In the initial phase of this grant, Conservancy will select a specific
 <p>In the initial phase, Conservancy will select a specific
   class of device. Upon achieving compliant source releases in that
@@ ... / @@ -166,3 +166,3 @@ and improvement of the released software for users.</p> @@
   choosing a different class of devices. This project is ambitious, and we’ll
-  be adept in our approach to ensure success.</p>
+  be adroit in our approach to ensure success.</p>

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