CopyleftConf/copyleftconf-website Changeset - bc5d6bc6783b

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Josh Simmons - 6 years ago 2018-09-05 03:13:54
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copy edits for ticket sales launch

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pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/attend/accommodations.html

pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/attend/attend.html

pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/attend/business-case.html

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		<p>We'll likely offer childcare this year. Details will be announced ~~closer~~ as soon as possible.</p>
		<p>We'll likely offer childcare this year. Details will be announced as soon as possible.</p>

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-<p>To buy a ticket, <a href="/dashboard">create an account, and go to the dashboard</a>. If you've already bought a ticket, you can check out our information on <a href="/attend/hotels">where to stay</a> if you want to come up for the weekend, and <a href="/attend/travel">how to get here</a>.</p>
+<p>To buy a ticket, <a href="/dashboard">create an account, and go to the dashboard</a>. If you've already bought a ticket, you can check out our information on <a href="/attend/hotels">where to stay</a> and <a href="/attend/travel">how to get here</a>.</p>
-<p><strong>Attendees should fill out their own registration form</strong>. When you complete the form, you'll receive a link that you can pass on to accounts staff if you need someone to pay on your behalf.</p>
+<p><strong>Attendees should fill out their own registration form</strong>. When you complete the form, you'll receive a link that you can pass on if someone is paying on your behalf.</p>
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 <h3>Lunch</h3>
-<p>In order to keep ticket costs as low as possible, we won’t be catering lunch this year.</p>
+<p>In order to keep ticket costs as low as possible, we don't cater lunch.</p>

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-    <li>Dates: Saturday, December 2nd and Sunday, December 3rd, 2017</li>
+    <li>Dates: Saturday, November 2nd and Sunday, November 3rd, 2018</li>
     <li>Venue: Mystic Theatre, Petaluma, California, USA</li>
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-North Bay Python is a new, nonprofit conference by and for the Python community.
 North Bay Python is a nonprofit conference by and for the Python community.
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