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Josh Simmons - 5 years ago 2018-09-05 03:13:54
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pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/attend/accommodations.html
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<p>We provide a small range of drinks and snacks at North Bay Python and will do our best to cater to dietary restrictions noted in your registration. We don't cater meals and will provide a guide to local stores and restaurants.</p>
 

	
 
<h3>Parents with Children</h3>
 

	
 
<p>We offer access to a private room with power for parents to nurse or pump milk just across the street from the conference venue at WORK Petaluma where parents can also find a bathroom with a changing table.</p>
 

	
 
<p>We'll likely offer childcare this year. Details will be announced closer as soon as possible.</p>
 
<p>We'll likely offer childcare this year. Details will be announced as soon as possible.</p>
 

	
 
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pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/attend/attend.html
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  P-Town. Rivertown. That place where the cows are. No matter what you call Petaluma, we want you to join us here for a great weekend of Python talks and networking. North Bay Python tickets start at $25 for unaffiliated individuals, and $180 for corporate attendees.
 
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<p>To buy a ticket, <a href="/dashboard">create an account, and go to the dashboard</a>. If you've already bought a ticket, you can check out our information on <a href="/attend/hotels">where to stay</a> if you want to come up for the weekend, and <a href="/attend/travel">how to get here</a>.</p>
 
<p>To buy a ticket, <a href="/dashboard">create an account, and go to the dashboard</a>. If you've already bought a ticket, you can check out our information on <a href="/attend/hotels">where to stay</a> and <a href="/attend/travel">how to get here</a>.</p>
 

	
 
<p><strong>Attendees should fill out their own registration form</strong>. When you complete the form, you'll receive a link that you can pass on to accounts staff if you need someone to pay on your behalf.</p>
 
<p><strong>Attendees should fill out their own registration form</strong>. When you complete the form, you'll receive a link that you can pass on if someone is paying on your behalf.</p>
 

	
 
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<div class="pull-right"><a class="btn btn-lg btn-primary" href="/tickets/buy">Buy a Ticket</a></div>
 
<h2>Which Ticket?</h2>
 

	
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<h2>Benefits</h2>
 

	
 
<h3>Conference access</h3>
 
<p>Two days of high-caliber talks about Python, and meeting new Pythonistas at North Bay Python.</p>
 

	
 
<h3>Lunch</h3>
 
<p>In order to keep ticket costs as low as possible, we wont be catering lunch this year.</p>
 
<p>In order to keep ticket costs as low as possible, we don't cater lunch.</p>
 

	
 
<p>To make up for it, we’ve located our conference right in the middle of Historic Downtown Petaluma’s restaurant district. You can find everything from market delis and barbecue, through to Michelin-rated restaurants, all within 5 minutes walk. You’ll get a better lunch than we’d ever be able to cater, for much less. We'll have a locals' guide to Petaluma to help you find places to eat.</p>
 

	
 
<h3>Morning Refreshments (TBA)</h3>
 
<p>If budget permits, or if we find a sponsor, we’ll provide coffee, tea, hot chocolate, and some light snacks in the morning before proceedings kick off on both days.</p>
 

	
pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/attend/business-case.html
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<h3>Key Information</h3>
 
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    <li>Dates: Saturday, December 2nd and Sunday, December 3rd, 2017</li>
 
    <li>Dates: Saturday, November 2nd and Sunday, November 3rd, 2018</li>
 
    <li>Venue: Mystic Theatre, Petaluma, California, USA</li>
 
    <li>Tickets: $200</li>
 
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<h3>How to Convince Your Boss</h3>
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This comes down to building a <em>business case</em> for your attendance. Start by explaining what the conference is, why you want to go, and why your employer will benefit (we've helpfully included some of the great reasons you might use and some sample prose you're welcome to copy into your email, below).</p>
 

	
 
<p>Explain to your boss what you'll bring back for the rest of the team (ideas, not imbibables): offer to give a summary presentation at lunch, or post a write-up to the company wiki, upon your return. We have some fantastic content in store, and you'll have no trouble finding things to teach your teammates when you get back. Sessions will be recorded and posted to YouTube, so you'll have ready-to-share links for those who want additional detail. You could also share the names, Twitter handles, or business cards from the people you'll meet — some of them might even be interested in working with you!</p>
 

	
 
<h3>Sample Language</h3>
 
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North Bay Python is a new, nonprofit conference by and for the Python community.
 
North Bay Python is a nonprofit conference by and for the Python community.
 
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The conference features over 20 sessions from experienced presenters hailing from across the US and internationally, speaking on a wide mix of topics. Sessions will include updates from leading Python community members on the state of major projects, technical explorations of how Python and Python-based systems work in practice, and thought-provoking explorations and lessons on how best to communicate as a team, foster diversity and inclusivity, and effectively engage within and beyond our teams and communities as developers.
 
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