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Bradley Kuhn (bkuhn) - 9 years ago 2014-12-20 00:09:01
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 % compliance-guide.tex                            -*- LaTeX -*-
 \part{A Practical Guide to GPL Compliance}
 \label{gpl-compliance-guide}
 {\parindent 0in
 This part is: \\
 \begin{tabbing}
 Copyright \= \copyright{} 2008, 2014 \= \hspace{.2in} Bradley M. Kuhn. \\
 Copyright \= \copyright{} 2014 \> \hspace{.2in} Free Software Foundation, Inc. \\
 Copyright \> \copyright{} 2008, 2014 \> \hspace{.2in} Software Freedom Law Center. \\
 \end{tabbing}
 \vspace{.1in}
 \begin{center}
 The copyright holders of this part hereby grant the freedom to copy, modify,
 convey, Adapt, and/or redistribute this work under the terms of the Creative
 Commons Attribution Share Alike 4.0 International License.  A copy of that
 license is available at
 \url{https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/legalcode}.
 \vfill
 This part includes material from many sources, including the following
+This part includes material from many sources, including some material from the following
 CC-By-SA-licensed published works: \\
 \begin{itemize}
 \item \hrefnofollow{http://www.softwarefreedom.org/resources/2008/compliance-guide.html}{\textit{The Practical Guide GPL Compliance}}, by Bradley M. Kuhn, Aaron
 Williamson and Karen Sandler, first published on 2008-08-20. \\
 \item \hrefnofollow{http://www.softwarefreedom.org/resources/2014/SFLC-Guide_to_GPL_Compliance_2d_ed.html}{\textit{Software Freedom Law Center Guide to GPL Compliance, 2nd
   Edition}} by Eben Moglen and Mishi Choudhary, first published on 2014-10-31. \\
 \end{itemize}
 However, this work is primarily composed of the many contributions it
 receives as a public, collaborative project.  Please
 \href{https://gitorious.org/copyleft-org/tutorial/history/master:compliance-guide.tex}{review
   its Git logs} for full documentation of all contributions.
 \end{center}
+}
 \pagebreak
 \chapter*{Executive Summary}
 This is a guide to effective compliance with the GNU General Public
 License (GPL) and related licenses.  Copyleft advocates
 usually seek to assist the community with

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 \part{Case Studies in GPL Enforcement}
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 This part is: \\
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 Copyright \= \copyright{} 2003, 2004, 2014 \hspace{1mm} \= \hspace{1.mm} \=  \kill
 Copyright \> \copyright{} 2014 \>  Bradley M. Kuhn. \\
 Copyright \> \copyright{} 2014 \>  Denver Gingerich \\
 Copyright \> \copyright{} 2003, 2004, 2014 \> Free Software Foundation, Inc. \\
 \end{tabbing}
 \vspace{.2in}
 \begin{center}
 The copyright holders hereby grant the freedom to copy, modify, convey,
 Adapt, and/or redistribute this work under the terms of the Creative Commons
 Attribution Share Alike 4.0 International License.  A copy of that license is
 available at \url{https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/legalcode}.
 \end{center}
 \vfill
 This part includes material from many sources, including the following
+This part includes material from many sources, including some material from the following
 CC-By-SA-licensed published works: \\
 \begin{itemize}
 \item \textit{Enforcement Case Studies}, written by Bradley M. Kuhn and published by the Free
   Software Foundation for its CLE courses  on 2004-01-20, 2004-08-24, and 2014-03-24.
 \end{itemize}
 However, this work is primarily composed of the many contributions it
 receives as a public, collaborative project.  Please
 \href{https://gitorious.org/copyleft-org/tutorial/history/master:enforcement-case-studies.tex}{review
   its Git logs} for full documentation of all contributions.
+}
 % =====================================================================
 % START OF SECOND DAY SEMINAR SECTION
 % =====================================================================
 \chapter*{Preface}
 This one-day course presents the details of five different GPL
 compliance cases handled by FSF's GPL Compliance Laboratory. Each case
 offers unique insights into problems that can arise when the terms of
 the GPL are not properly followed, and how diplomatic negotiation between

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 \tutorialpartsplit{``Detailed Analysis of the GNU GPL and Related Licenses''}{This part} is: \\
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 Copyright \= \copyright{} 2003--2007, 2014 \hspace{.1mm} \=  \kill
 Copyright \> \copyright{} 2014 \> Bradley M. Kuhn \\
 Copyright \> \copyright{} 2014 \>  Anthony K. Sebro, Jr. \\
 Copyright \> \copyright{} 2003--2007, 2014 \>  Free Software Foundation, Inc. \\
 Copyright \> \copyright{} 2014 \>  Software Freedom Law Center.
 \end{tabbing}
 \vspace{.2in}
 \begin{center}
 The copyright holders of \tutorialpartsplit{``Detailed Analysis of the GNU GPL and Related Licenses''}{this part} hereby grant the freedom to copy, modify,
 convey, Adapt, and/or redistribute this work under the terms of the Creative
 Commons Attribution Share Alike 4.0 International License.  A copy of that
 license is available at
 \verb=https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/legalcode=.
 \end{center}
 \vfill
 This part includes material from many sources, including the following
+This part includes material from many sources, including some material from the following
 CC-By-SA-licensed published works: \\
 \begin{itemize}
 \item \textit{Detailed Analysis of the GNU GPL and Related Licenses}, written by
 Bradley M. Kuhn, Daniel B.~Ravicher, and John Sullivan and published by the Free Software Foundation for its CLE courses on 2004-01-20,
 -08-24, and 2014-03-24.
 \item \hrefnofollow{http://gplv3.fsf.org/gpl-rationale-2006-01-16.html}{\textit{GPLv3 First Discussion Draft Rationale}}, written and published by the Free
   Software Foundation on 2006-01-16.
 \item \hrefnofollow{http://gplv3.fsf.org/opinions-draft-2.html}{\textit{GPLv3 Second Discussion Draft Rationale}}, written and published by the Free
   Software Foundation circa 2006-07.
 \item \hrefnofollow{http://gplv3.fsf.org/gpl3-dd3-guide}{\textit{GPLv3 Third Discussion Draft Rationale}}, written and published by the Free
   Software Foundation on   2007-03-28.
 \item \hrefnofollow{http://gplv3.fsf.org/dd3-faq}{\textit{GPLv3  Discussion Draft 3 FAQ}}, written and published by the Free1 Software Foundation on   2007-03-28.
 \item \hrefnofollow{http://gplv3.fsf.org/gpl3-dd4-guide.html}{\textit{GPLv3 Final Discussion Draft Rationale}} written and published by the Free
   Software Foundation onon 2007-05-31.
 \item \hrefnofollow{http://www.gnu.org/licences/gpl3-final-rationale.pdf}{\textit{GPLv3 Final Rationale}}, written and published by the Free
   Software Foundation on 2007-06-29.
 \end{itemize}
 However, this work is primarily composed of the many contributions it
 receives as a public, collaborative project.  Please
 \href{https://gitorious.org/copyleft-org/tutorial/history/master:gpl-lgpl.tex}{review
   its Git logs} for full documentation of all contributions.

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