Copyleft/guide Changeset - b0801a2b8a2f

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Bradley Kuhn (bkuhn) - 9 years ago 2014-12-20 00:09:01
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Clarify sentence.

Make this sentence a bit clearer.

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compliance-guide.tex

enforcement-case-studies.tex

gpl-lgpl.tex

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 \begin{center}
 The copyright holders of this part hereby grant the freedom to copy, modify,
 convey, Adapt, and/or redistribute this work under the terms of the Creative
 Commons Attribution Share Alike 4.0 International License.  A copy of that
 license is available at
 \url{https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/legalcode}.
 \vfill
 This part includes material from many sources, including the following
+This part includes material from many sources, including some material from the following
 CC-By-SA-licensed published works: \\
 \begin{itemize}
 \item \hrefnofollow{http://www.softwarefreedom.org/resources/2008/compliance-guide.html}{\textit{The Practical Guide GPL Compliance}}, by Bradley M. Kuhn, Aaron
 Williamson and Karen Sandler, first published on 2008-08-20. \\
 \item \hrefnofollow{http://www.softwarefreedom.org/resources/2014/SFLC-Guide_to_GPL_Compliance_2d_ed.html}{\textit{Software Freedom Law Center Guide to GPL Compliance, 2nd
   Edition}} by Eben Moglen and Mishi Choudhary, first published on 2014-10-31. \\
 \end{itemize}
 However, this work is primarily composed of the many contributions it
 receives as a public, collaborative project.  Please
 \href{https://gitorious.org/copyleft-org/tutorial/history/master:compliance-guide.tex}{review

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 \begin{center}
 The copyright holders hereby grant the freedom to copy, modify, convey,
 Adapt, and/or redistribute this work under the terms of the Creative Commons
 Attribution Share Alike 4.0 International License.  A copy of that license is
 available at \url{https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/legalcode}.
 \end{center}
 \vfill
 This part includes material from many sources, including the following
+This part includes material from many sources, including some material from the following
 CC-By-SA-licensed published works: \\
 \begin{itemize}
 \item \textit{Enforcement Case Studies}, written by Bradley M. Kuhn and published by the Free
   Software Foundation for its CLE courses  on 2004-01-20, 2004-08-24, and 2014-03-24.
 \end{itemize}
 However, this work is primarily composed of the many contributions it
 receives as a public, collaborative project.  Please
 \href{https://gitorious.org/copyleft-org/tutorial/history/master:enforcement-case-studies.tex}{review
   its Git logs} for full documentation of all contributions.

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 The copyright holders of \tutorialpartsplit{``Detailed Analysis of the GNU GPL and Related Licenses''}{this part} hereby grant the freedom to copy, modify,
 convey, Adapt, and/or redistribute this work under the terms of the Creative
 Commons Attribution Share Alike 4.0 International License.  A copy of that
 license is available at
 \verb=https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/legalcode=.
 \end{center}
 \vfill
 This part includes material from many sources, including the following
+This part includes material from many sources, including some material from the following
 CC-By-SA-licensed published works: \\
 \begin{itemize}
 \item \textit{Detailed Analysis of the GNU GPL and Related Licenses}, written by
 Bradley M. Kuhn, Daniel B.~Ravicher, and John Sullivan and published by the Free Software Foundation for its CLE courses on 2004-01-20,
 -08-24, and 2014-03-24.
 \item \hrefnofollow{http://gplv3.fsf.org/gpl-rationale-2006-01-16.html}{\textit{GPLv3 First Discussion Draft Rationale}}, written and published by the Free
   Software Foundation on 2006-01-16.
 \item \hrefnofollow{http://gplv3.fsf.org/opinions-draft-2.html}{\textit{GPLv3 Second Discussion Draft Rationale}}, written and published by the Free
   Software Foundation circa 2006-07.
 \item \hrefnofollow{http://gplv3.fsf.org/gpl3-dd3-guide}{\textit{GPLv3 Third Discussion Draft Rationale}}, written and published by the Free
   Software Foundation on   2007-03-28.

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