From aec0f8080e26454aa60dcbe5f4e55698a0bf88a7 2014-12-01 18:44:47
From: Bradley M. Kuhn <bkuhn@ebb.org>
Date: 2014-12-01 18:44:47
Subject: [PATCH] Rework text on form.

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diff --git a/www/conservancy/static/supporter/index.html b/www/conservancy/static/supporter/index.html
index 242c0a6109b69611db7704082c9e1897f696a6c4..3c151f3056341c67bedddff1038b47bc9a3c1393 100644
--- a/www/conservancy/static/supporter/index.html
+++ b/www/conservancy/static/supporter/index.html
@@ -173,23 +173,24 @@ internal policies</a> are published and available for scrutiny.</p>
                         <option value="LadiesL" />Ladies' L</option>
                          <option value="LadiesXL" />Ladies' XL</option>
                       </select><br/>
-                      <h5>Public Acknowledgment of your Support?:</h5>
+                      <h5>Would you like to be acknowledged publicly as a Conservancy  Supporter?:</h5>
                       <input type="hidden" name="on2" value="List name in the donors page" />
                       <input type="radio" checked="checked" name="os2" value="Yes" />Yes
                       <input type="radio" name="os2" value="No" />No<br/>
             
-                                            <h5>Join Announcement Email List?</h5>
+                                            <h5>Join Conservancy's Low-Traffic Announcement Email List?</h5>
                       <input type="hidden" name="on4" value="Join Mailing List" />
                       <input type="radio" checked="checked" name="os4" value="Yes" />Yes
                       <input type="radio" name="os4" value="No" />No<br>
                       <br />
-                      <small>You will be redirected to the Paypal website.</small>
                       <input type="hidden" name="hosted_button_id" value="WJZ98RW3A49XJ">
                       <input type="image"
                              src="https://www.paypalobjects.com/en_US/i/btn/btn_donateCC_LG.gif"
                              border="0" name="submit" alt="Become a Supporter Now!">
                       <img alt="" border="0" src="https://www.paypalobjects.com/en_US/i/scr/pixel.gif" width="1" height="1">
                     </form>
+                      <small>You will be redirected to the Paypal website to
+                      become a supporter when you click &ldquo;Donate&rdquo;.</small>
 
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