From 458a279d001984037357e947f62976cd3ff41c12 2010-11-10 14:46:44
From: Bradley M. Kuhn <bkuhn@ebb.org>
Date: 2010-11-10 14:46:44
Subject: [PATCH] Grammar fixes and related typos discovered by Loïc Dachary.  Thanks!

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diff --git a/www/conservancy/static/members/apply/index.html b/www/conservancy/static/members/apply/index.html
index 9fd9e1a4374e3c40bc5aa504dc1d6acb6beb6a16..df3b35d1fb6002ec963b6ec7b9776819b715163a 100644
--- a/www/conservancy/static/members/apply/index.html
+++ b/www/conservancy/static/members/apply/index.html
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 {% block submenuselection %}Applying{% endblock %}
 {% block content %}
 
-<h1>How To Apply to Become a Member Project</h1>
+<h1> Applying to Join Conservancy as a Member Project</h1>
 
 <p>New applications for project membership with Conservancy are considered
   twice a year.  The deadlines for submission of application materials are
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ independent tax-exempt non-profit.</p>
   process, we suggest that you prepare your project community for this
   discussion once your project is accepted.</p>
 
-<h2>How much does will it cost us financially to join Conservancy?</h2>
+<h2>How much does it cost us financially to join Conservancy?</h2>
 
 <p>After your application is approved, as part of the negotiation of the
   formal agreement, we'll discuss this issue.  Typically, we ask that
diff --git a/www/conservancy/static/members/services/index.html b/www/conservancy/static/members/services/index.html
index 6a2e4ca63241a75d6c928238924757c19c8d56e6..b064c8380e1586f2cf51091ecfc70e1b3387e61d 100644
--- a/www/conservancy/static/members/services/index.html
+++ b/www/conservancy/static/members/services/index.html
@@ -27,9 +27,9 @@
    limits that the law places on what member projects can do with their
    assets, but those limits are the same as if the project was an
    independent non-profit entity.  Usually, the project leadership
-   instructs Conservancy's leadership how spend the funds for the project
-   and Conservancy sends these funds on the project's behalf in any way
-   that is appropriate activity under Conservancy's 501(c)(3)
+   instructs Conservancy's leadership on how the project's funds are spent.
+   Conservancy spends these funds on the project's behalf on any expenses
+   that constitute appropriate activity under Conservancy's 501(c)(3)
    not-for-profit mission.  Some typical uses of earmarked donations by
    Conservancy's member projects are:
 <ul>