From 3aa7167ef3e0d32bd457e763105b32c72b551b25 2021-10-18 16:58:33
From: Daniel Pono Takamori
Date: 2021-10-18 16:58:33
Subject: [PATCH] use shoestring text
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Software Freedom Conservancy is a nonprofit organization
-that advocates for ethical technology for the public good. Our mission is to
-ensure the rights of consumers (software users) to repair and reinstall their
-purchased software. We carry out this work this by promoting and defending
-users' rights the following ways: fostering Free and Open Source Software
-(FOSS) projects, driving initiatives that actively make technology more
-inclusive, and advancing policy strategies that defend FOSS (such as copyleft).
- Learn more.
+centered around ethical technology. Our mission is to ensure the right to
+repair, improve and reinstall software. We promote and defend these rights
+through fostering free and open source software (FOSS) projects, driving
+initiatives that actively make technology more inclusive, and advancing policy
+strategies that defend FOSS (such as copyleft). Learn more.