diff --git a/www/conservancy/static/GiveUpGitHub/index.html b/www/conservancy/static/GiveUpGitHub/index.html
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--- a/www/conservancy/static/GiveUpGitHub/index.html
+++ b/www/conservancy/static/GiveUpGitHub/index.html
@@ -93,12 +93,9 @@ industry, as GitHub does not even offer any self-hosting FOSS option.
 Their <em>entire</em> codebase is secret.  For example, while we have our
 complaints about GitLab's business model of parallel &ldquo;Community&rdquo;
 and &ldquo;Enterprise&rdquo; editions, at least GitLab's Community Edition
-provides basic functionality for self-hosting and is 100% FOSS.  Other
-competitors, like SourceHut, do even better by providing their entire
-codebase as FOSS for self-hosting and &ldquo;dog fooding&rdquo; by using
-their own platform to develop its software in public!  In addition,
-non-profit FOSS hosting sites such
-as <a href="https://codeberg.org">CodeBerg</a> also develop their platform
+provides basic functionality for self-hosting and is 100% FOSS. Meanwhile,
+    there are <em>non-profit</em> FOSS hosting sites such
+as <a href="https://codeberg.org">CodeBerg</a>, who develop their platform
     publicly as FOSS.</p></li>
 
 <li><p>GitHub has long sought to discredit copyleft generally.  Their various
@@ -180,19 +177,19 @@ resource not yet listed, you can discuss it on
 the <a href="https://lists.sfconservancy.org/mailman/listinfo/give-up-github">Give-Up-GitHub
     mailing list</a>.</p>
 <ul>
-<li>Alternative Hosting:
+<li>Alternative Hosting Services:
     <ul>
     <li><a href="https://codeberg.org">CodeBerg</a></li>
     <li><a href="https://sourcehut.org/">SourceHut</a></li>
-    <li>Self-Host (or join a group that self-hosts) with:
+    </ul>
+ <li>Self-Host (or join a group that self-hosts).  A few options:
         <ul><li><a href="https://gitea.io">Gitea</a></li>
-        <li><a href="https://sr.ht/~sircmpwn/sourcehut/">SourceHut</a></li>
         <li> <a href="https://gitlab.com/rluna-gitlab/gitlab-ce">GitLab
         Community Edition</a> (note, the GitLab Enterprise Edition, which is
         provided to the public on gitlab.com,  is (like GitHub) trade-secret,
           proprietary, vendor-lock-in software)</li>
-    </ul></li>
-</ul></li>
+        <li><a href="https://sr.ht/~sircmpwn/sourcehut/">SourceHut</a></li>
+ </ul></li>
     (We'll be adding tutorials soon on how to self-host!)
     </ul></p>