diff --git a/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/attend/attend.html b/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/attend/attend.html
index b68c9991ea31a45d440b94806d313b16fa4f2eb3..9ba64634dd03bda0026224562d7cafbff459fb47 100644
--- a/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/attend/attend.html
+++ b/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/attend/attend.html
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 {% block body_class %}attend{% endblock %}
 
 {% block lede %}
-  P-Town. Rivertown. That place where the cows are. No matter that you call Petaluma, we want you to join us here for a great weekend of Python talks and networking. North Bay Python tickets start at $25 for unaffiliated individuals, and $180 for corporate attendees.
+  P-Town. Rivertown. That place where the cows are. No matter what you call Petaluma, we want you to join us here for a great weekend of Python talks and networking. North Bay Python tickets start at $25 for unaffiliated individuals, and $180 for corporate attendees.
 {% endblock %}
 
 
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 
 <h3>Corporate <small>$200 ($180 Early Bird)</small></h3>
 
-<p><strong>For company employees, and individuals who can legitimately claim the cost of attending the conference as a business expense or a tax deduction</strong>.</p>
+<p><strong>For company employees, and individuals who can claim the cost of attending the conference as a business expense or other tax deduction</strong>.</p>
 
 <p>Includes a free t-shirt, and recognition of your affiliation on your conference badge and on the conference supporters list. Group discounts are available for organizations that buy 5 or more tickets.</p>