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Josh Simmons - 3 years ago 2018-09-05 03:13:54
joshuasimmons@google.com
copy edits for ticket sales launch
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pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/attend/accommodations.html
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<p>We offer access to a private room with power for parents to nurse or pump milk just across the street from the conference venue at WORK Petaluma where parents can also find a bathroom with a changing table.</p>
 

	
 
<p>We'll likely offer childcare this year. Details will be announced closer as soon as possible.</p>
 
<p>We'll likely offer childcare this year. Details will be announced as soon as possible.</p>
 

	
 
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pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/attend/attend.html
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<p>To buy a ticket, <a href="/dashboard">create an account, and go to the dashboard</a>. If you've already bought a ticket, you can check out our information on <a href="/attend/hotels">where to stay</a> if you want to come up for the weekend, and <a href="/attend/travel">how to get here</a>.</p>
 
<p>To buy a ticket, <a href="/dashboard">create an account, and go to the dashboard</a>. If you've already bought a ticket, you can check out our information on <a href="/attend/hotels">where to stay</a> and <a href="/attend/travel">how to get here</a>.</p>
 

	
 
<p><strong>Attendees should fill out their own registration form</strong>. When you complete the form, you'll receive a link that you can pass on to accounts staff if you need someone to pay on your behalf.</p>
 
<p><strong>Attendees should fill out their own registration form</strong>. When you complete the form, you'll receive a link that you can pass on if someone is paying on your behalf.</p>
 

	
 
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<p>Two days of high-caliber talks about Python, and meeting new Pythonistas at North Bay Python.</p>
 

	
 
<h3>Lunch</h3>
 
<p>In order to keep ticket costs as low as possible, we wont be catering lunch this year.</p>
 
<p>In order to keep ticket costs as low as possible, we don't cater lunch.</p>
 

	
 
<p>To make up for it, we’ve located our conference right in the middle of Historic Downtown Petaluma’s restaurant district. You can find everything from market delis and barbecue, through to Michelin-rated restaurants, all within 5 minutes walk. You’ll get a better lunch than we’d ever be able to cater, for much less. We'll have a locals' guide to Petaluma to help you find places to eat.</p>
 

	
pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/attend/business-case.html
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<h3>Key Information</h3>
 
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    <li>Dates: Saturday, December 2nd and Sunday, December 3rd, 2017</li>
 
    <li>Dates: Saturday, November 2nd and Sunday, November 3rd, 2018</li>
 
    <li>Venue: Mystic Theatre, Petaluma, California, USA</li>
 
    <li>Tickets: $200</li>
 
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<h3>Sample Language</h3>
 
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North Bay Python is a new, nonprofit conference by and for the Python community.
 
North Bay Python is a nonprofit conference by and for the Python community.
 
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