From 88ef9e913b985b7caa406ee5a446b00aea5b1da3 2017-08-14 22:37:33
From: Christopher Neugebauer <chrisjrn@gmail.com>
Date: 2017-08-14 22:37:33
Subject: [PATCH] More about-us copy tidied up; adds a bit about prices
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 <p>North Bay Python is a two-day, single-track Python conference held at the Mystic Theatre in Historic Downtown Petaluma, California, over the weekend of December 2 &amp; 3, 2017.</p>
 
-<p>We're a nonprofit conference for professionals, enthusiasts and students alike. We're focused on inclusion, accessibility, diversity, and affordability, Most importantly, we're planning a great lineup of talks from all over the Python ecosystem, with plenty of time to meet new people and
-  develop new ideas too.</p>
+<p>We're a nonprofit conference for professionals, enthusiasts and students alike. We're focused on inclusion, accessibility, diversity, and affordability. Most importantly, we're planning a great lineup of talks from all over the Python ecosystem, with plenty of time to meet new people and develop new ideas.</p>
 
-<p>Our venue, the Mystic Theatre in Downtown Petaluma, is a beautiful example of an early 1900s Vaudeville theatre, and it's a short walk away from over 50 different food and drink options in Downtown Petaluma, as well as several different hotels, the closest of which is only a block away.</p>
+<p>Our venue, the Mystic Theatre in Downtown Petaluma, is a beautiful example of an early 1900s Vaudeville theatre. You can find over 50 different food and drink options a short walk away, and the nearest hotel is only a block away.</p>
 
 
 <h2>The Conference</h2>
 
 <p>North Bay Python is a single-track conference with a carefully curated set of talks representing the diverse Python community and their different areas of interest.</p>
 
-<p>If a topic is less to your interest, or you've met some people you really want to sit down and chat with, we'll have plenty of areas away from the main theatre to catch up and chat as well.</p>
+<p>If a topic is less to your interest, or you've met some people you really want to sit down and chat with, we'll have plenty of areas away from the main theatre to catch up and chat.</p>
+
+<p>Our goal is to keep prices as low as possible. That means we won't be catering lunch. Instead, you can look forward to extra-long lunch breaks you can use to explore all of the great food options around the venue.</p>
 
 
 <h2>Petaluma, California</h2>