From 0160b2314003431ca3c4259978bcf444bd9fbbae 2017-08-13 01:38:53 From: Joshua Simmons Date: 2017-08-13 01:38:53 Subject: [PATCH] refine copy, look at quotes, dashes, capitalization etc --- diff --git a/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/about/colophon.html b/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/about/colophon.html index b45bda3fc8529febeebaace8cc80a27da497066f..797ec528aa7828971cf2ba6b3682c65b477eb412 100644 --- a/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/about/colophon.html +++ b/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/about/colophon.html @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@

Call for Proposals

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Portions of our Call for Proposals page were drawn from ideas seen on DjangoCon EU, SeaGL, Fog City Ruby, and others. Thanks to all for their inspiration and permission to borrow!

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Portions of our Call for Proposals page were drawn from ideas seen on DjangoCon EU, SeaGL, Fog City Ruby, and others. Thanks to all for their inspiration and permission to borrow!

Code of Conduct

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Our fiscal sponsor is Software Freedom Conservancy, a 501(c)(3) charity dedicated to the promotion and development of free and open source software. Conservancy allows us to work without managing our own corporate structure and administrative services. Our relationship with Conservancy goes beyond logistics, though, as we are also philosophically aligned as we work to advance software freedom and expand the Python developer community.

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Photography

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describe/credit photos used on the home page and other pages, perhaps list event photographer information ...maybe Next Day Video?

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Python

"Python" and the Python logos are trademarks or registered trademarks of the Python Software Foundation, used by North Bay Python with permission from the Foundation.

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  • Django is the web framework that underpins everything else.
  • Symposion is used for the call for proposals and session scheduling.
  • Registrasion is used for ticket sales.
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  • Inkscape is used to create most of our graphics.
  • {% endblock %} \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/about/team.html b/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/about/team.html index 8c2d6d17622670575bc33c6d6d4aaf529d3b6c25..c61224604665a9bb1bb4a35d48eb47f53c6110f5 100644 --- a/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/about/team.html +++ b/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/about/team.html @@ -26,11 +26,11 @@ Our five-person team has years of experience building communities, running event

    Sam Kitajima-Kimbrel, Program Chair

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    Sam is a Python developer and distributed-systems “enthusiast” hailing from Seattle by birth, New York by nurture, and the Bay Area by choice. About five years ago he attended PyCon US for the first time and hasn’t been able to break the habit since; after making the jump from audience to stage in 2014 and speaking regularly at PyCons and other events around the world, he was thrilled to sign on with the North Bay Python team when invited by Chris and Josh. Sam currently works at Nuna building healthcare data infrastructure for the U.S. Medicaid and Medicare programs and resides in Oakland with his husband Kameron.

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    Sam is a Python developer and distributed-systems “enthusiast” hailing from Seattle by birth, New York by nurture, and the Bay Area by choice. About five years ago he attended PyCon US for the first time and hasn't been able to break the habit since; after making the jump from audience to stage in 2014 and speaking regularly at PyCons and other events around the world, he was thrilled to sign on with the North Bay Python team when invited by Chris and Josh. Sam currently works at Nuna building healthcare data infrastructure for the U.S. Medicaid and Medicare programs and resides in Oakland with his husband Kameron.

    Andrew Godwin

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    Andrew is a Django and Python developer who originally hails from London but moved to the Bay Area four years ago. He’s been writing open source software for over a decade as well as working in various different parts of the technology industry, and currently works at Eventbrite. He regularly speaks at Python (and other) events around the world, and has a keen interest in building communities and inclusivity.

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    Andrew is a Django and Python developer who originally hails from London but moved to the Bay Area four years ago. He's been writing open source software for over a decade as well as working in various different parts of the technology industry, and currently works at Eventbrite. He regularly speaks at Python (and other) events around the world, and has a keen interest in building communities and inclusivity.

    Sarah Kuchinsky

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    Josh Simmons

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    Josh is a community organizer and web developer who was born and raised in the North Bay. He spent 4.5 years building Web & Interactive Media Professionals (WIMP), a local community with over 600 members, before moving on to do community management for O’Reilly Media. These days Josh works on the Google Open Source outreach team and serves as a board member and volunteer CFO for Open Source Initiative.

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    Josh is a community organizer and web developer who was born and raised in the North Bay. He spent 4.5 years building Web & Interactive Media Professionals (WIMP), a local community with over 600 members, before moving on to do community management for O'Reilly Media. These days Josh works on the Google Open Source outreach team and serves as a board member and volunteer CFO for Open Source Initiative.

    Software Freedom Conservancy

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    Conservancy is a public charity dedicated to the promotion and development of free and open source software, and is the fiscal sponsor of North Bay Python. Without Conservancy and the people behind it -- namely Karen Sandler, Bradley Kuhn, Tony Sebro, and Brett Smith -- none of this would be possible!

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    Conservancy is a public charity dedicated to the promotion and development of free and open source software, and is the fiscal sponsor of North Bay Python. Without Conservancy and the people behind it—namely Karen Sandler, Bradley Kuhn, Tony Sebro, and Brett Smith—none of this would be possible!

    {% endblock %} diff --git a/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/code_of_conduct/code_of_conduct.md b/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/code_of_conduct/code_of_conduct.md index 89cfc68e2cb31993a20a2553777bd3b9c3483dbf..90328371401df271163463227bc513a6e8f857d4 100644 --- a/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/code_of_conduct/code_of_conduct.md +++ b/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/code_of_conduct/code_of_conduct.md @@ -33,8 +33,9 @@ If a participant engages in behavior that violates this code of conduct, the con Contact Information ------------------- -If you are being harassed, notice that someone else is being harassed, or have any other concerns, please contact a member of conference staff. Conference staff will be wearing t-shirts and/or badges that clearly identify them as staff. You may also contact venue staff and ask to be put in touch with the conference chair — Christopher Neugebauer. +If you are being harassed, notice that someone else is being harassed, or have any other concerns, please contact a member of conference staff. Conference staff will be wearing t-shirts and/or badges that clearly identify them as staff. You may also contact venue staff and ask to be put in touch with the conference chair—Christopher Neugebauer. + If the matter is especially urgent, please call our Code of Conduct and safety incident hotline at XXX-YYY-ZZZZ. This number will automatically route to a member of the conference staff who can render assistance. Conference staff will be happy to help participants contact hotel/venue security or local law enforcement, provide escorts, or otherwise assist those experiencing harassment to feel safe for the duration of the conference. We value your attendance. diff --git a/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/code_of_conduct/harassment_procedure_attendee.md b/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/code_of_conduct/harassment_procedure_attendee.md index cf97bd78d2eedf0313522aee94036c21f0585062..99b41d6345abe993940e2bc092e935c1a85041ee 100644 --- a/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/code_of_conduct/harassment_procedure_attendee.md +++ b/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/code_of_conduct/harassment_procedure_attendee.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ *This procedure has been adopted from the Ada Initiative's guide titled "[Conference anti-harassment/Responding to Reports](http://geekfeminism.wikia.com/wiki/Conference_anti-harassment/Responding_to_reports "Ada Initive Anti-harassment Guide on Responding to Reports")".* -1\. Keep in mind that all conference staff will be wearing a conference t-shirt/button with the word “STAFF” on it (or otherwise clearly marked as staff). The staff will also be prepared to handle the incident. All of our staff are informed of the [code of conduct policy](/code-of-conduct "North Bay Python Code of Conduct") and guide for handling harassment at the conference. *There will be a mandatory staff meeting onsite at the conference when this will be reiterated.* +1\. Keep in mind that all conference staff will be wearing a conference t-shirt/button with the word "STAFF" on it (or otherwise clearly marked as staff). The staff will also be prepared to handle the incident. All of our staff are informed of the [code of conduct policy](/code-of-conduct "North Bay Python Code of Conduct") and guide for handling harassment at the conference. *There will be a mandatory staff meeting onsite at the conference when this will be reiterated.* 2\. Report the harassment incident (preferably in writing) to a conference staff member. All reports are confidential. Please do not disclose public information about the incident until the staff have had sufficient time in which to address the situation. This is as much for your safety and protection as it is the other attendees. diff --git a/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/news.html b/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/news.html index f719ea78fe3ea66ff0a9fbc8cf6f35bb00a7ee45..fe8d2ca3cac7d52619cb4b98af41a7039013acde 100644 --- a/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/news.html +++ b/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/news.html @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@

    Now accepting talk proposals for North Bay Python 2017

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    Monday, August 21, 2017 -- The North Bay Python team is excited to announce that the call for proposals (CFP) is now open! We are seeking speakers of all experience levels to contribute to our inaugural conference. The CFP will close on September 29, 2017.

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    Monday, August 21, 2017—The North Bay Python team is excited to announce that the call for proposals (CFP) is now open! We are seeking speakers of all experience levels to contribute to our inaugural conference. The CFP will close on September 29, 2017.

    North Bay Python is a single-track event featuring two days of presentations by members of the community. The vast majority of the conference program will come from people who propose talks in our CFP process. Whether you use Python professionally, as a hobbyist, or are just excited about Python or programming or open source, we'd love to hear from you.

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    North Bay Python joins Software Freedom Conservancy

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    Bloop, August Bleep, 2017 -- We are proud to announce that North Bay Python is now a member project of Software Freedom Conservancy, a 501(c)(3) charity dedicated to ethical technology and the development and promotion free and open source software. Conservancy will act as our fiscal sponsor, allowing our team to operate without managing our own corporate structure and administrative services.

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    Bloop, August Bleep, 2017—We are proud to announce that North Bay Python is now a member project of Software Freedom Conservancy, a 501(c)(3) charity dedicated to ethical technology and the development and promotion free and open source software. Conservancy will act as our fiscal sponsor, allowing our team to operate without managing our own corporate structure and administrative services.

    Conservancy is home to many popular free and open source software projects, like Selenium, phpMyAdmin, Twisted, and Outreachy, some of which run their own events. North Bay Python has the distinct honor of being the first member project that is exclusively focused on organizing community events.

    diff --git a/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/program/call_for_proposals.md b/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/program/call_for_proposals.md index 21b97379109d0b01ffebbc0abce0b478bb78f065..3b7415329edadef52ede0b18065755b5ee02c486 100644 --- a/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/program/call_for_proposals.md +++ b/pinaxcon/templates/static_pages/program/call_for_proposals.md @@ -18,19 +18,19 @@ North Bay Python is dedicated to featuring a diverse and inclusive speaker lineu **All speakers will be expected to have read and adhere to the conference [Code of Conduct](/code-of-conduct "North Bay Python Code of Conduct"). In particular for speakers: slide contents and spoken material should be appropriate for a professional audience including people of many different backgrounds. Sexual language and imagery is not appropriate, and neither are language or imagery that denigrate or demean people based on race, gender, religion, sexual orientation, physical appearance, disability, or body size.** -We will make every effort to provide accommodations for speakers and attendees of all abilities — all we ask is that you let us know so we can prepare accordingly. +We will make every effort to provide accommodations for speakers and attendees of all abilities—all we ask is that you let us know so we can prepare accordingly. North Bay Python is a conference in support of the local programmer community outside of the core San Francisco Bay Area tech scene. We aim to feature a mix of local and non-local speakers to offer a program with broad appeal. **All speakers will receive complimentary registration to the conference, and requests for further financial compensation to assist with travel will be considered on a case-by-case basis independent of the proposal's merits.** ## Talk formats -**Most of the talk slots will be short** — approximately 25 to 30 minutes, including Q&A. If your ideas would benefit from a longer slot, please explain in your submission how you would use the additional time. +**Most of the talk slots will be short**—approximately 25 to 30 minutes, including Q&A. If your ideas would benefit from a longer slot, please explain in your submission how you would use the additional time. ## Topics **We are a single track conference. This means that your talk needs to hold the attention of beginners to experienced developers alike.** -This doesn’t mean that every talk needs to be a beginner’s talk: if you’re talking about advanced concepts, people who are new to Python – or new to your library – should come away excited about the possibilities, and know how to learn the concepts that they need to get there. +This doesn't mean that every talk needs to be a beginner's talk: if you're talking about advanced concepts, people who are new to Python – or new to your library – should come away excited about the possibilities, and know how to learn the concepts that they need to get there. This is a list of topics we think might go well in the North Bay Python program, but it is by no means exhaustive. If you have a talk idea on a subject not listed here and you think it fits well with our community and mission, we would love to hear about it! @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ To help us evaluate proposals and build our program, we would like as much detai If you've given your talk before, links to video or slides would be excellent, or if you've blogged about this topic links to your blog posts would be of use as well. -Your speaker profile includes a space for you to describe your prior experience giving talks — this is your chance to talk yourself up and explain why you're the best person in the world to bring us your amazing ideas, so take advantage of it! +Your speaker profile includes a space for you to describe your prior experience giving talks—this is your chance to talk yourself up and explain why you're the best person in the world to bring us your amazing ideas, so take advantage of it! Please click the invitingly large button below to submit a proposal.