@@ -2972,7 +2972,7 @@ GPLv3~\S4 is a revision of GPLv2~\S1 (as discussed in \S~\ref{GPLv2s1} of
this tutorial). There are almost no changes to this section from the
GPLv2~\S1, other than to use the new defined terms.
The only notable change of ``a fee'' to ``any price or no price'' in the
The only notable change, of ``a fee'' to ``any price or no price'', is in the
first sentence of GPLv3\S4\P2. The GPLv2\S1\P1 means that the GPL permits
one to charge money for the distribution of software. Despite efforts by
copyleft advocates to explain this in GPLv2 itself and in other documents,