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Denver Gingerich - 10 years ago 2014-11-07 21:58:26
denver@ossguy.com

Fix typos/grammar in "U-Boot Compilation" sec on

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@@ ... / @@ -276,3 +276,3 @@ Fortunately, thanks in large part to the FSF's @@
     standards for RYF certification}, and among them is a pristine example of
   CCS\@}, electronics products have begun to appear on the market that are
+  CCS\@.}, electronics products have begun to appear on the market that are
 held to a higher standard of copyleft compliance.  As such, for the first
@@ ... / @@ -468,3 +468,3 @@ Therefore, the investigator proceeded to simply run: @@
 and waited approximately 40 minutes for the build to complete\footnote{Build
   times will likely vary widely on various host systems}.  The investigator
+  times will likely vary widely on various host systems.}.  The investigator
 kept a
@@ ... / @@ -513,5 +513,5 @@ build and install the bootloader for the device. @@
-The investigator followed the instructions for compiling u-Boot, and found
+The investigator followed the instructions for compiling U-Boot, and found
 them quite straight-forward.  The investigator discovered two minor
-annoyances, however, while building U-Boot:
+annoyances, however, while building U-Boot:
@@ ... / @@ -519,3 +519,3 @@ annoyances, however, while building U-Boot: @@
- \item the variable \verb0$U-BOOT_SRC0 was used as a placeholder for the name
+ \item The variable \verb0$U-BOOT_SRC0 was used as a placeholder for the name
    of the extracted source directory.  This was easy to surmise and was not a
@@ ... / @@ -542,3 +542,3 @@ mips-librecmc-linux-uclibc-gcc.bin: /lib/libc.so.6: @@
    context that these binaries were simply for a different architecture, and
-   the investigator simply removed ``toolchain/bin'' and used a symlink the
+   the investigator simply removed ``toolchain/bin'' and used a symlink to
    utilize the toolchain already built earlier (during the compilation
@@ ... / @@ -651,6 +651,6 @@ compilation). @@
-To ensure that CCS did corresponds properly to the firmware original
+To ensure the CCS did indeed correspond to the firmware original
 installed on the TPE-NWIFIROUTER, the investigator compared the built
 firmware image with the filesystem originally found on the device itself.
-The comparison steps we as follows:
+The comparison steps were as follows:
@@ ... / @@ -661,6 +661,6 @@ The comparison steps we as follows: @@
   on ``bin/ar71xx/librecmc-ar71xx-generic-tl-wr841n-v8-squashfs-factory.bin''
-  bottom), and running
+  and then running
   \href{http://www.binaryanalysis.org/en/content/show/download}{bat-extratools}'
   ``squashfs4.2/squashfs-tools/bat-unsquashfs42'' (at ) on the resulting
   morx0.squash and use the filesystem in the new squashfs-root directory for
   ``squashfs4.2/squashfs-tools/bat-unsquashfs42'' on the resulting
   morx0.squash, using the filesystem in the new squashfs-root directory for
   comparison.
@@ ... / @@ -685,3 +685,3 @@ The comparison steps we as follows: @@
-  \item Check the ``strings'' output of ``/bin/busybox'' to confirm it was similar in both
+  \item Check the ``strings'' output of ``/bin/busybox'' to confirm it is similar in both
    places (similar number of lines and content of lines).  (One cannot directly
@@ ... / @@ -698,4 +698,4 @@ The comparison steps we as follows: @@
    retrievable using the U-Boot console (the start address of the kernel in
    flash appears to be 0x9F000000, based on the ``u-boot\verb0_0reflash''
    instructions).
    flash appears to be 0x9F020000, based on the boot messages seen in the
    serial console).
   \end{enumerate}
@@ ... / @@ -722,3 +722,3 @@ annoyances were discovered: @@
 \item Including pre-built toolchain binaries that don't work on all systems,
-  and failure to built  toolchain binaries to the right location.
+  and failure to put built toolchain binaries in the right location.
 \end{itemize}
@@ ... / @@ -740,3 +740,3 @@ can be learned here: @@
     obligations at the time of distribution} (provided, of course, that the
   distributor is otherwise in compliance with copyleft.
+  distributor is otherwise in compliance with copyleft).
@@ ... / @@ -759,4 +759,5 @@ can be learned here: @@
   the license}.  ThinkPenguin uses encouragement of  users to improve and
   make their devices better as commercial differentiator.  Copyleft advocates
   remain baffled why other companies have not realized how large the market for
   make their devices better as a commercial differentiator.  Copyleft advocates
   remain baffled as to why other companies have not realized how the large the
   market for
   users who seek hackable devices continues to grow.  By going beyond the

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