From 1857efb0fb3939109bce2e7526630df7533e01bf 2014-03-19 13:57:00
From: Bradley M. Kuhn <bkuhn@ebb.org>
Date: 2014-03-19 13:57:00
Subject: [PATCH] Rewrite this paragraph, including formatting changes.

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diff --git a/gpl-lgpl.tex b/gpl-lgpl.tex
index 3f68afd5e3c217d72efd20b8c59905a1d1bdcc6e..52847eb40d946179632675f0a38415f584a7eb7c 100644
--- a/gpl-lgpl.tex
+++ b/gpl-lgpl.tex
@@ -2212,9 +2212,13 @@ discusses a few of the new ones.
 
 % FIXME: rewrite to FOUR new terms
 
-Section 0 includes definitions of two new terms: ``covered work'' and
-``propagate.''  The use of the term ``covered work'' enables some of the
-wording in the revised GPL to be simpler and clearer.
+GPLv3~\S0 includes definitions of four new terms not found in any form in
+GPLv2: ``covered work'', ``propagate'', ``convey'', and ``Appropriate Legal
+Notices''.
+
+While ``covered by this license'' is a phrase found in GPLv2, defining it
+more complete in a single as ``covered work'' enables some of the wording in
+GPLv3 to be simpler and clearer than its GPLv2 counterparts.
 
 % FIXME: rewrite propagate