From 105da6758bd7eb492078f68bfd85ebf76d6e650c 2014-11-07 15:54:25 From: Denver Gingerich Date: 2014-11-07 15:54:25 Subject: [PATCH] Fix typos in "Consumer Purchase and Unboxing" sec --- diff --git a/enforcement-case-studies.tex b/enforcement-case-studies.tex index 7ead8d605b6da6f573fe0ee8161ef924493181ed..ecba3a5f8a4cc24f9b0113635f14aeefbd0163b3 100644 --- a/enforcement-case-studies.tex +++ b/enforcement-case-studies.tex @@ -302,10 +302,10 @@ investigator seeks to take actions that reasonably technically knowledgeable users would during the ordinary course of their acquisition and use of products. As such, the investigator typically purchases the device on the open market to verify that distribution of the copylefted software therein -complies with binary distribution requirements(such as those +complies with binary distribution requirements (such as those \tutorialpartsplit{discussed in \textit{Detailed Analysis of the GNU GPL and - Related Licenses}}{discussed herein \S~\ref{GPLv2s3} and - \S~\ref{GPLv3s6}}. + Related Licenses}}{discussed here in \S~\ref{GPLv2s3} and + \S~\ref{GPLv3s6}}). % FIXME: Above is my only use of \tutorialpartsplit in this chapter. I just % got lazy and that should be fixed by someone. @@ -315,8 +315,8 @@ complies with binary distribution requirements(such as those Therefore, the investigator first purchased the TPE-NWIFIROUTER through an online order, and when the package arrived, examined the contents of the box. The investigator immediately discovered that ThinkPenguin had taken advice -from \S~\ref{offer-for-source} in this guide, and have chosen to use -\hyperref[GPLv2s3a]{GPLv2\S3(a)} and \hyperref[GPLv3s6]{GPLv3s6}, rather an +from \S~\ref{offer-for-source} in this guide, and had chosen to use +\hyperref[GPLv2s3a]{GPLv2\S3(a)} and \hyperref[GPLv3s6]{GPLv3s6}, rather than using the \hyperref[offer-for-source]{problematic offer for source provisions}. This choice not only speeds up the investigation (since there is no CCS offer to test), but also simplifies the compliance requirements for