diff --git a/gpl-lgpl.tex b/gpl-lgpl.tex index bf08bb34c1fa20358611caa91af0c86f65326c8c..63a7283d86ff8cc4094d184a6da873be741008ac 100644 --- a/gpl-lgpl.tex +++ b/gpl-lgpl.tex @@ -2802,7 +2802,7 @@ in \S~\ref{GPLv2s3} of this tutorial), the distribution of object code may either be accompanied by the machine-readable source code, or it may be accompanied by a valid written offer to provide the machine-readable source code. However, unlike in GPLv2, that offer cannot be exercised by any third -party; rather, only those ``who possesses the object code'' it can exercised +party; rather, only those ``who possesses the object code'' can exercise the offer. (Note that this is a substantial narrowing of requirements of offer fulfillment, and is a wonderful counterexample to dispute claims that the GPLv3 has more requirements than GPLv2.) @@ -2947,7 +2947,7 @@ GPLv3 drafting process. However, companies and governments that use specialized or enterprise-level computer facilities reported that they actually \textit{want} their systems not to be under their own control. Rather than agreeing to this as a concession, or bowing to pressure, they ask -for this as a \textit{preference}. It is not clear that GPL should interfere +for this as a \textit{preference}. It is not clear that the GPL should interfere here, since the main problem lies elsewhere. While imposing technical barriers to modification is wrong regardless of