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@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@ aforementioned goal.  Copyleft as a concept is usually implemented in the
 details of a specific copyright license, such as the GNU
 [General Public License](http://www.gnu.org/copyleft/gpl.html) and the
 [Creative Commons Attribution Share Alike License](http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/).
-Copyright holders of creative work can choose and implement these licenses
-for their own works unilaterally to build communities that share those
-creative works. 
+Copyright holders of creative work can unilaterally implement these licenses
+for their own works to build communities that collaboratively share and
+improve copylefted creative works.
 
 ## What is copyleft.org?